1.4.9 Tips for How to Improve Use of Cohesive Devices

Tips for Improving Your Use of Cohesive Devices for IELTS General Letter Writing Task 1

Improving your use of cohesive devices in English can greatly enhance the flow and clarity of your writing or speaking. Here are some practical tips:

1. Understand the Types of Cohesive Devices
Familiarize yourself with the main categories:

  • Additive: moreover, furthermore, in addition, also.
  • Adversative: however, nevertheless, on the other hand, although.
  • Causal: because, therefore, thus, as a result.
  • Temporal: then, next, afterward, finally.

2. Study Examples

Read essays, articles, or transcripts of speeches to see how cohesive devices are used effectively in both informal and formal writing. Pay attention to their placement and purpose.

3. Practice in Context

Write paragraphs or essays and intentionally include cohesive devices. For example:

  • Without cohesion: "I like to exercise. It is good for health. It can be fun."
  • With cohesion: "I like to exercise because it is good for health. Furthermore, it can be fun."

4. Avoid Overuse

Using too many cohesive devices can make your writing feel forced or repetitive. Aim for balance by using them where they naturally fit.

5. Vary Your Vocabulary

Learn synonyms for common cohesive devices to add variety. For instance:

  • Instead of "because," try "as," "since," or "due to."
  • Instead of "however," use "nevertheless," "yet," or "even so."

6. Focus on Sentence Structure

Use complex and compound sentences to naturally incorporate cohesive devices. For example:

  • Simple: "It rained. We stayed inside."
  • Cohesive: "Since it rained, we stayed inside."

7. Practice Peer Review

Share your writing with someone else and ask them to check for coherence and cohesion. They may notice overuse, underuse, or misuse of cohesive devices.

8. Use Transition Word Lists

Keep a list of cohesive devices handy while writing to remind yourself of the options.

9. Feedback and Revision

After writing, review your work to identify places where cohesion could be improved. Replace repetitive or awkward transitions.

10. Work with a Tutor

If possible, practice with an English tutor or teacher who can provide guidance tailored to your specific needs.

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